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Post by timberwolf042002 on Dec 12, 2004 13:20:00 GMT -5
Great Story! Very detailed!
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Post by Desce on Dec 14, 2004 3:27:13 GMT -5
Nice story, and I like the characters identities. Also liked the details you put into it.  |
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Post by Sabin on Dec 14, 2004 11:30:05 GMT -5
Detail? I just like to atleast come to the level of the books I read. (Wheel of Time) I dont realy notice the anmout of detail I put into my stories. I just like to describe what everything is like! ;D
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Post by timberwolf042002 on Dec 14, 2004 14:01:18 GMT -5
It's still a great story though ! Do you plan on writing any other stories? |
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Post by Sabin on Dec 15, 2004 10:57:04 GMT -5
I am planing on writing another, but I am having trouble comming up with a topic, since i dont want to do another were discovery, since i just finished one. Any suggestion? Mabye were-dragons....
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Post by timberwolf042002 on Dec 15, 2004 14:44:04 GMT -5
Well as much as I like reading stories about werewolves, lol  , maybe you should write a story that comes straight from your heart, (corny?  Sorry, lol) like your last story, or maybe another story based off of dreams, events, people you know ETC. But your the author, so write whatever comes to mind. I don't really take preference on what were to do, so no pressure here, lol. ;D |
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Post by Desce on Dec 16, 2004 5:10:41 GMT -5
I have the inkling of an idea.
I would write it myself, but I have way too many to finish and start now.
So, it's about a vampire.
Female, or male, you choose, vampire is thinking about her/his life story. How cold and dark the world seems without feeling. THe way it goes is that they feel nothing, and when I say nothing I mean nothing. No pain, sorrow, love, hate, anger, emptiness, just blank like a piece of white paper. Tells' of legend heard of where someone is chosen on earth to greet the souless vampires and bring them life, touch, sensation. Although heart will never beat again, will feel. The main, meets this person and all that was promised happens. Catch is is that they take away the soul of that person eventually, like life draining. Only vamp who has something special about them can do something? That's about as far as I got in theory. See what you can do to make it your own, or just piggy back, I don't care.
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Post by Sabin on Dec 16, 2004 10:56:09 GMT -5
Seem like a good idea to me. Ill look into it, thanks Desce! ;D
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, maybe you should write a story that comes straight from your heart, (corny? 
Sorry, lol) like your last story, or maybe another story based off of dreams, events, people you know ETC. But your the author, so write whatever comes to mind. I don't really take preference on what were to do, so no pressure here, lol. ;D