Companions of the Night

[Desce]

This is dedicated to all mates out there

You and I are companions of the night,
Racing swiftly by the full moonlight.
Fearlessly leaping, almost touching the sky,
I look at you and smile, Although I don't know why.
"Come on," I call. "This is our destiny!"
Luring you in, exalted just to feel you next to me.
Our breathing is synchronized,
As we pass up beasts ten times our size.
No one can see our bodies, just our souls,
Yet who we are, nobody knows.
Two separate physical presences,
Yet together we are like one powerful essence.
Come to me, my midnight brother,
Concealed by the darkness except our eyes,
But please do not feel smothered,
It would be to my demise.
Feel the hidden attraction, let it grow,
My feelings too are strong, you just don't know.
Hidden beneath a great facade, my heart calls out to you,
Please hear me when I say, Man, I love you.

[LittleWolf]

I like that poem. it is very heart filled!

[Kenja]

You managed to keep verse structure in order, and at the same time give your work both emotion, and actual sense. You be surprised how many poems have the ryming sceme, but lack any actual story, or message. Or have the scheme, and the message, but lack emotion. Yours had everything. Please, write more.

[Indis]

Yes i love it to reminds me of *smiles* someone I know who is one with me.

[Desce]

*grins broadly*

Thank you both. Unfortunately, this is the best one I've done so far. There are others, but they don't really measure up to this one.

I will post more, because I love constructive criticism.