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Love
Jan 29, 2005 23:00:22 GMT -5
Post by chipweter91 on Jan 29, 2005 23:00:22 GMT -5
Love is the cry of a neglected child, love is harsh, neither soft, neither mild.
Love is dangerous, and can end a life, true love is cutting your arm with a knife.
For love is whispering in the ears of a tortured soul....
it is the whimper of a crack of the whip, Love is of pain, and pain is of woe, Sincerest love is watching your life die slow. Love is enraged, but as is free, for loving is commiting a killing spree.
Love is a pain as a pain is of gain, as a life of thine loving, thou shan't live again.
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Sabin
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A lone wolk is either a survivor or a brute
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Love
Jan 29, 2005 23:03:04 GMT -5
Post by Sabin on Jan 29, 2005 23:03:04 GMT -5
wow, that is very deep, i really love it!
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Love
Jan 29, 2005 23:08:10 GMT -5
Post by timberwolf042002 on Jan 29, 2005 23:08:10 GMT -5
My my that is deep! Great Poem Chip! ;D
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Love
Jan 29, 2005 23:09:31 GMT -5
Post by chipweter91 on Jan 29, 2005 23:09:31 GMT -5
my poetry speaks from thine heart and thine lips of thy soul.
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LittleWolf
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I maybe in every shadow.. always look behind you..
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Love
Feb 5, 2005 11:41:05 GMT -5
Post by LittleWolf on Feb 5, 2005 11:41:05 GMT -5
..wow, you said all true words... I am the sincere love, I watch my mate and I die slowly. ^_^ I love your poetry. Your very talented.
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Love
Feb 7, 2005 18:14:32 GMT -5
Post by chipweter91 on Feb 7, 2005 18:14:32 GMT -5
thanks alot ;D a poet is always happy to hear their words are admired.
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LittleWolf
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I maybe in every shadow.. always look behind you..
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Love
Mar 6, 2005 13:49:55 GMT -5
Post by LittleWolf on Mar 6, 2005 13:49:55 GMT -5
No problem. ^_^
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