Melfaroth
Omega
My soul, how it pains for the hurts of Arda and the children of Iluvatar, mighty Eru.
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Post by Melfaroth on Nov 21, 2005 0:32:53 GMT -5
My Lord, you are great
This road's gone astray
Yet a miracle surviving
Through the mist and the gray.
The stars, how they twinkle
And shine of your bliss
Shall ever stay shining
When one's deeds go amiss.
The ring of much sufferage
(May) lay heavy on souls
Yet your love and your glory
May this child ever hold.
written: August 14th, 2002
©Melfaroth
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Post by Indis on Nov 22, 2005 19:46:36 GMT -5
Hey I like it. Did you write this?
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Melfaroth
Omega
My soul, how it pains for the hurts of Arda and the children of Iluvatar, mighty Eru.
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Post by Melfaroth on Nov 22, 2005 21:42:38 GMT -5
Yes I did. It came to me quite out of the blue, actually. That is how I usually write my poetry. I have written others, but those two, I thought, seemed most fitting to this group. And I am glad you like it. ^_^
I do too.
Namarie Mellyn,
Melfaroth
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Post by Indis on Nov 23, 2005 21:56:45 GMT -5
ya i write in the same manner lol. When it comes to mind I write it.
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Melfaroth
Omega
My soul, how it pains for the hurts of Arda and the children of Iluvatar, mighty Eru.
Posts: 64
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Post by Melfaroth on Nov 24, 2005 5:08:17 GMT -5
Well, I have forced others so that I could get it done because I needed it to get done, but usually I do better if it comes on its own. I have written a couple for some characters from the anime Inuyasha, mostly one in particular, and I think those came of their own accord and they seemed to turn out well. The forced either seem to start lame or they are hard to finish because forced they are incomplete.
Namarie Mellon,
Melfaroth
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Post by Indis on Nov 24, 2005 9:39:49 GMT -5
ya I write more on emotion and how I currantly feel events and so on.
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Melfaroth
Omega
My soul, how it pains for the hurts of Arda and the children of Iluvatar, mighty Eru.
Posts: 64
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Post by Melfaroth on Nov 24, 2005 13:23:23 GMT -5
.. And it truly is, poetry, something that comes from your emotions. From me it comes from deep within and that is why I have to let it surface. Sometimes, though, I just get an itch to write something, and at those times, I never know what until my pen hits the paper. I will probably be posting a couple of others I have written if they appear fitting to this forum. We will see. Otherwise, until our next meeting...
Namarie,
Melfaroth
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